Wednesday, December 12, 2012

My best inspiration for Charlie Beckwith thus far... as a graphic

Been hunting around for possible graphics that might inspire similar artwork for Charlie Beckwith.  This is an example from a Patrick Nagel art deco piece.  (I'm unsure of its title, or that it even had one; it's modified to have blue eyes, by the way.)   He was a popular "art deco" style of graphic artist back in the 80's and 90's... typical pieces seen at that time would advertise women's apparel or accessories for places like Nordstroms, Broadway, Neimen Marcus and Saks Fifth Ave. 

I like the clean lines and the simplicity.  So, I'm going to attempt some shots of her in that style.  If I end up with something I like I'll try some for Jake as well.  They would serve as good avatars in various places.

Here is another from Patrick Nagel (modified slightly for blue eyes, and deletion of a dramatic ear-ring).  The first sample (above) is slightly older in age for Charlie, and this second sample is a overly Asian in style, but they both communicate much of what I had in mind:
And a concept piece for Jake from comic artist Sean E (from his Hunter-Killer comic covers).  This particular character is too old to be Jake Sloan, of course, but the art, dynamics, and features match overall.  Sean E wouldn't do some character art for JSA, would he?  He's a dynamite artist... if you're at all into this kind of art be sure you check out his material.  It's top notch.

By the way, here is a blurb about SeanE (that's Ellery), who lives in Perth, Australia:

SeanE
Sean Ellery
Artist | Hobbyist | Digital Art
Australia
I'm a high school teacher of Social Studies + Geography/History during the day and Caped Colouring Crusader by night, colouring stuff on the side as a hobby and the odd paid gig here and there.
Current Residence: Perth Australia
Favourite style of art: comic digital art
Operating System: win xp
Favourite cartoon character: pinky and the brain


I'll post my own Jake Sloan and Charlie Beckwith soon.

Tuesday, December 11, 2012

Book Reviews from the Amazon page! (7 total now)

Thought I would post these book reviews


5.0 out of 5 stars

Exciting, engaging, and entertaining novel, December 10, 2012


By Diane Boynton

This review is from: Trident's Flame: A Jake Sloan Adventure (Kindle Edition)

I found Trident's Flame a great read. I appreciated the novel's winsome and intelligent characters, fascinating locations, and captivating writing style. But wait--there's more! Suspense, action, romance, and a touch of Christian faith engaged me until the very end of the book. Can't wait to read what Fox has in store for the Sloan family... and Trident's Flame readers! I see a sequel on the horizon...

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5.0 out of 5 stars

Safe Sailing!, November 4, 2012


By Jeffrey Walter (actually, Christy W. Carmel Valley, CA, US)

This review is from: Trident's Flame: A Jake Sloan Adventure (Kindle Edition)

Are you searching for a blast of excitement to fill those long hours on a trip? Are you a teenager, frustrated in your search for books that don't compromise virtue for action? Planning to start another family read? Trident's Flame is an action-packed story with a "boatload" of romance and a solid 'good beats evil' basis. It is a romaction novelty by Christian author Dan S. Fox that will keep you turning it's pages!

Safe sailing!

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5.0 out of 5 stars

Great read with refreshing perspective!, August 3, 2012


By Toby Erickson (Oroville, CA, US)

This review is from: Trident's Flame: A Jake Sloan Adventure (Kindle Edition)

As a Christian who loves the action and adventure genre, I was thrilled with Trident's Flame. Fox's realistic and descriptive hand to hand combat had me feeling and delivering every blow.
The Sloans remind me of the very few real Christian men I know who follow Christ without checking their masculinity at the door.

I particularly appreciated Trident's perspective on romance and dating. While most stories would have characters slide in and out of quick and easy one-nighters or abruptly ended relationships, Trident's Flame has characters wisely seeking counsel, honestly examining feelings and praying for direction before pursuing romance. This is an approach to relationships which is sorely needed in today's culture (Christian or otherwise).

The action, adventure and romance are wonderfully packaged in a story full of intrigue, depth and mystery!

Read it! Then, share it with your kids as a way of starting a discussion about dating, purity and the pursuit of wisdom!

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5.0 out of 5 stars

I'll Take Action, Adventure, with a Twist of Romance!, August 2, 2012


By Victoria Lords

This review is from: Trident's Flame: A Jake Sloan Adventure (Kindle Edition)

As a mother of teenagers I found it refreshing to read a book that inspires, encourages, and represents teens as responsible and thoughtful young adults. I would definitely recommend this book to those who enjoy the action/adventure/romance genres. As the story unfolded I found myself immersed in an adventure that kept me intrigued until the last chapter; so much so that I am eagerly waiting for the next book. Dr. Fox's superb writing enabled me to envision the action sequences in my mind's eye. I often felt as if I were "watching" a movie as I read the book! The story-line is filled with exciting adventure tinged with a hint of romance. Young Jake Sloan's adventurous spirit, fearless perseverance, and exceptional character make him a great role model for today's youth.

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5.0 out of 5 stars

An exciting read!, July 11, 2012


By WendyJ

This review is from: Trident's Flame: A Jake Sloan Adventure (Kindle Edition)

I thoroughly enjoyed reading Trident's Flame! The book is fast paced and full of adventure, danger, romance and suspense. Jake and Charlie are engaging, fun, yet down to earth characters who I felt an immediate connection with. The author did a great job of drawing me in, and by the last page left me hoping for a sequel! I can't wait to read more!

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5.0 out of 5 stars

Great Book!, July 11, 2012


By Emaizingelio

Amazon Verified Purchase(What's this?)

This review is from: Trident's Flame: A Jake Sloan Adventure (Kindle Edition)

I just finished reading this book a couple of days ago and it was great. I particularly enjoyed the action scenes where Jake used his surroundings to gain an advantage. The book takes you down many twists and turns, just when you think it is over you are thrown into a crazy action scene where the characters fight for their lives. Trident's Flame was captivating, fun, energetic, and a must read!

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5.0 out of 5 stars

Great adventure book!, July 3, 2012


By HeatherW

This review is from: Trident's Flame: A Jake Sloan Adventure (Kindle Edition)

Trident's Flame was a great read. I was quickly drawn in by the adventure of the book, but was particularly enamored with the main characters, Jake and Charlie. They are heroic and yet familiarly human! Thought provoking as the characters wrestle with both human drama and danger. Hoping there is a book 2 and 3, even 4!

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Sunday, December 9, 2012

Genesis of the Jake Sloan Adventures, tribute to Frank Peretti

Not many know that Jake is named after Dr. Jacob Cooper, one of Dr. Jim Sloan's old friends.  A fun connection to Peretti's original stories.

Excerpt from the Acknowledgements in Trident's Flame:

"Finally, thanks to Mr. Frank Peretti.  It was his Dr. Cooper family adventures (an eight-book series) that inspired me to embark on this road.  I must have read his stories to my kids a half-dozen times during their tween & teen years.  (Incidentally, the main character is affectionately named after an old friend and colleague of Jake’s father:  Dr. Jacob Cooper.)  My kids and I kept waiting for the ninth book to come out.  We wanted to see if Dr. Cooper would ever remarry.  Would Jay and Lila have a tough time accepting her?  What would be their next adventure? 
Alas, it was not to be.  Yet it was such a pleasure to have quality adventure material available, and for kids who were newly discovering the joys of reading.  We will forever be thankful for Mr. Peretti’s work, parents and kids alike!  The Jake Sloan Adventures are my humble attempt to continue the tradition of creating engaging, encouraging adventure literature for teens and young adults."

Here is the cover for one of Peretti's novels in the Cooper Family Adventures.











And here is the CBD link for the series:
(http://www.christianbook.com/Christian/Books/easy_find?Ntt=cooper+family+adventures&N=0&Ntk=keywords&action=Search&Ne=0&event=ESRCG&nav_search=1&cms=1)

If you are a teen, "tween" or a parent with teens or tweens, this series is worth the read.  Please take a look.

Saturday, December 8, 2012

Excerpt from SANCTUM THREAT (book 2 in the Jake Sloan Adventures)

Excerpt from Sanctum Threat:

Jake Sloan and his friend Aric Decker in Cafe Des Ami in downtown old Monterey...

"When he looked up he noticed something in the reflection from the large glass panels directly behind their seats.  Jake’s back was to the door with Aric facing the front.  The glass panels behind Aric acted like large darkened mirrors.  Since being on the phone, two men came in and sat together at a table near the front window. 

There were several tables throughout the cafĂ©, with a large counter that stretched from the front door back toward the rear of the room.  People were lined up, waiting their turn to order.  They talked or just stood there looking at the menu posted behind the counter.  The two men made it look as if they were reading, but Jake noticed that they made rotating glances around the room at regular intervals.  Aric and Jake’s table was the only spot in the room where the men’s eyes seems to linger.

Jake casually pulled a small mechanic’s mirror out of his bag.  A mechanic’s mirror is a small round mirror encased in metal, with a long, telescopic arm that is used to extend it.  It is made especially for looking into hard-to reach spots around a car engine.  He motioned to Aric to take his earplugs out, and Aric did so. 

“Don’t look at this mirror, ok?” Jake said cautiously, “Don’t look over at the guys at that front table, either.  Just look bored, or keep reading.”  Aric did as he suggested.  Jake extended the telescoping arm outward and lifted the mirror over his shoulder, just enough to catch a line of sight on the men at the table.  In spite of several people who walked in or out of the shop, including a few pretty women dressed in bright-colored dresses, and a rather loud and argumentative couple at the counter, both men appeared almost glued to Jake and Aric’s table.  “These guys seem especially interested in us,” Jake calmly observed.

“The question is, why?” Aric responded calmly, glancing up briefly to see them, and then down at his book, “Do you think they’re the same ones who were watching you before?”

“I don’t know. This is the first time I’ve been able to see them closely.  They match the general description of those others.”  Jake adjusted the mirror to his other shoulder, “You wouldn’t happen to have the cell phone that has that built-in camera in it, would you?”

“No, not today,” Aric said, “Sorry.”

Jake wished he had his War Bag with him, the dark green duffle bag in which he kept a variety of tools.  War Bag is what the men who gave it to him had called it.  The bag was given to him by three Navy SEALs during his visit to Kodiak.  Inside they’d put three sets of fatigues in different colors and patterns, and a Navy-issue K-Bar combat knife.  It was a nice gift, he thought.  It was their way of thanking him for what he did on the Munro.  Since then, he’d added a wide variety of items.  He was pleased with his collection of tools, but it was that camera that he really wished he had right now.  He made a mental note to himself to keep another disposable camera in his book bag from now on.  Better yet, he corrected himself, a small digital camera.  That way, the pics can be transmitted online right away.

Rachel stopped by their table, “Hey guys, need a refill,” she asked, holding a steaming coffee pot in each hand.

“No thanks, Rachel,” responded Jake.  “But Aric, here, might.”  Her auburn hair bounced around her shoulders as she stopped at Aric’s side.
 
“Sir, would you like a refill,” she said with a French accent, playing with Aric, who was normally very serious around girls.  Jake noticed her looking closely for his reaction.  She had been working at the coffee shop since before the two boys discovered it.  Rachel was often the person taking their orders or stopping by their table.  Aric looked blankly at his cup, and then at Rachel.  He didn’t say anything.  Jake thought, Oh-no, he’s stuck!

“I think,” Jake interrupted, putting on his best British accent, “what young master Decker is trying to say is, ‘Why yes, lovely mademoiselle!  I would be honored to have you refill my cup with hot java!  You are so kind, and I might say, quite charming and not unattractive!”  Jake held back a chuckle as Rachel smiled and poured his cup full of steaming coffee. 

She grinned at Jake, raising her eyebrows at the same time. 

“Thank you,” mumbled Aric as she turned to leave.  His face was red.  He turned an angry set of eyes on his friend, “What were you doing?!”

“What?!” Jake responded, “You looked frozen!”  He couldn’t contain a small laugh, “You should thank me, you know.  I think she likes you, buddy.”

“Oh, yeah, right!” Aric shot back, “As if any girl is impressed with the tongue-tied!”

“You never know.”

“I don’t think so, Jake.  And you can stop trying to help me quite so much.” 

Jake looked back at his mirror, restraining a grin.  The man Jake observed most closely was a stocky, high-collared Caucasian in his early thirties.
 
His name was Larios Hawking, code name Aurora-17, and he was the commander of the Guevara team..."

-- from Chapter 2, Tailed in Town

Wednesday, December 5, 2012

Been considering a story concept for Jake Sloan that involves tigers... he engages a tiger up close, and bears the scars from the experience... the story would explore the themes of evil in the world and what to do about it, how the Christian faces such issues, and the critical point in a person's childhood when their understanding of evil goes beyond an imagined "boogeyman."

William Blake had something to say about tigers... and evil. and the Omnipotent God who created tigers.

His last stanza reads:

Tyger Tyger burning bright,
In the forests of the night:
What immortal hand or eye,
Dare frame thy fearful symmetry?

It is said that the poem reflects the awesomeness of the One who created the tiger... hinting at the unapproachable holiness of a God who can and does administer justice with the definitiveness of a tiger crushing its prey.

Monday, December 3, 2012

My little helper... Bentley the beagle.


Sometimes I'm in one spot so long that Bentley takes it upon himself to climb up and offer some "help."

What a funny dog.

Perhaps I should write a beagle into the Jake Sloan Adventures.

Sanctum Threat is FINISHED (book 2)!

I finished up Sanctum Threat a couple days ago (2nd book in the series)!  I'm so jazzed.

Now comes the editing phase.  I've got this checklist I've been using to help me keep on track with quality and specifics of each story.  I'll paste it in below.  I recently came across a book in a used book store that contained a similar list, but 50 items strong (it's entitled Writing Young Adult Novels, by Irwin and Eyerly, 1988). 


Basic Writing Check Questions:
D. S. Fox, 2010.

1. Enough empathy for the primary and secondary characters?  Does the reader find themselves caring for them, including their hardship?

2. Enough detail in scene descriptions?  Does the reader feel a clear sense of place?  Think of foods, tastes, scents, drinks (compared to others they’ve tasted), sights that interest them (parks, buildings, animals, objects, statues, art).

3. Does the reader feel a sufficient level of moral outrage against the bad guys?  Are they bad enough?  Do they get sufficient “screen time”?

4. Are the plot and action sufficiently real (as in realistic)?

5. Is there enough description of the characters, especially the main characters?  And have you avoided redundancy?

6. Are you including educational information about the scenes and places where the story takes place (even if a little)?

7. Is there a sufficient and consistent level of tension and suspense at the end of each chapter or scene?  Does it make the reader want to turn the page?

8. Does the main character change and grow throughout the story?  And if so, is it clearly communicated and demonstrated in the story?

9. Is the plot both simple enough to follow (clarity issue) AND sophisticated to keep the (YA) audience engaged?

10. Is there a clear Christian presence and tone to the story?

11. Is the theme clearly communicated?  Can it be tracked without much difficulty?

12. Is there enough interaction from, and story presence among the secondary characters?

13. What references to other literature are you making?  Are you encouraging your readers to read more and other stories?

14. Are you tracking both the foreground and background stories/plots for the reader?

15. Are you including teachings and lessons that Jake has received from others?  Are there flashbacks to these people?

16. Have you given the work significant prayer, both in the writing and God’s use of it for impact in reader’s lives?

Saturday, December 1, 2012

Presenting... the cover for the hard copy edition of Trident's Flame!







We hope to have the hard copy of Trident's Flame available through Amazon before Christmas!



Buy a copy for a friend!

Chris Bohrman of IDEA Graphics (buddy of mine) has been wonderfully helpful with the design.  Pass along IDEA Graphics to those you know with graphic design needs.  He has been in the business for years and is doing a dynamite job.


I should add that the cover art is by Kirk DuPonce of DogEared Designs.  He created the digital cover for NavPress and did an excellent job.  We were so pleased with his work.

Sunday, November 18, 2012


Been working on titles for the five books in the series to-date.  Here's what it looks like:

1.  Trident's Flame (NavPress, 2012)
2.  Sanctum Threat (coming in late 2012-early 2013)
3.  Choke Point (coming in early 2013)
4.  Force Multiplier (due in mid 2013)
5.  Bone Breaker (due later in 2013)

Still contemplating the avenues for publication.

Trident's Flame will be out in hard copy this next month, so interested readers can get access to ebook or paperbacks as they wish (a welcome change).

I am seriously considering self-publishing the remainder, having the artwork done by a local graphic artist, printing through a POD agency, and marketing the same way that any modern publishing house does.

The modern publishing industry no longer does active marketing unless you are a J.K. Rowling or other guaranteed seller.  It's funny, actually, because they tend to use the language of marketing and promotion in all their query-submission material, as if by allowing them to publish you suddenly gain a significant investment in marketing your book.  No.  It's do-it-yourself these days.  So we must adjust to the climate. 

Wednesday, November 7, 2012

Trident's Flame is about to come out in hard copy!

eBooks are still available through these venues:



On Amazon:
5 reviews: Heather W, Victoria Lords, Emazingelio, Toby E, Wendy J.

On Barnes and Noble:
0 reviews:

On CBD (Christian Book Distributors):
2 reviews: Victoria Lords and Misty.

On NavPress:
1 reviews: Victoria Lords
 ISBN-13: 9781612913407; Digital Download; Media Type: ( ePub ); 339 Pages